A Snowy Day
By: Lauren ![](<a href="http://www.hiboox.com/go/pictures/miscellaneous/snowflakes,da5d8c8a32e7960eca67ac4ce57210f9.gif.html" alt="Hosted on Hiboox.com"><img src="http://images0.hiboox.com/images/4308/da5d8c8a32e7960eca67ac4ce57210f9.gif" border="0" ></a>)
Yesterday, the drive was flooded with a white blanket.
Last night, the snow softly covered one another.
Today, fluffy white sparkles of snow are everywhere!
About the author: Lauren likes apples and bananas. Her favorite subject is art. She got her idea for this piece from her snowy driveway this winter. She’s written an anthology of bunny poems, a fiction story titled: The Land of Expectations, and two personal narratives titled: A Fall Leaf and an Autumn Morning.
cool story!!!
GREAT Poam!
hey gurl this is your gurl maddi hallor and i just want to say that was the best poem i have ever heard i love the part where you say the snowy blanket covers the drive way and how it snows again and the blankets lap one another it is awsome take it from a friend!
I see you have been working hard
Great Job
Jared York
To lauren
Hi Lauren,
I think your peom is GREAT! Keep up the good work
your friend,
Aliya
I like how you added details!!!
I liked the details! Good job! 🙂 Brad
I love the details girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lauren! That poem was so short!
nice work on the poem i think the best part was how you put today yesterday and last week,i also liked when you said the snowy blanket covers the driveway it was good. and i think that was the shortest poem ever and was still really good/ ausome.good job!
thats a great story lauren!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love how you descibed the sparkling snow.